Book Title: What Makes Me…Me by Anne Baldwin Category: Children’s Fictions (ages 3-7), 34 pages Genre: Children’s Picture Book Publisher: Anne Baldwin Release date: June 2021 Formats Available for Review: print – softback (USA only), e-book PDF Tour dates: May 2 to May 20, 2022 Content Rating: G -Suitable for everyone.
Book Description:
What Makes Me…Me is a story about harnessing your super powered brain. We are all special and unique and our differences are what make us all special. What Makes Me…Me was written especially for those kids with neurological differences, their families, and their friends.
Anne Baldwin is a wife, mom, and fierce advocate for neurodiverse kids. Anne wrote her first book What Makes Me…Me after her son Levi was diagnosed with Tourette Syndrome. Passionate about stopping the stigma around Tourette-Syndrome, Anne hopes that her books about embracing your differences as what makes you unique will help kids with Tourette Syndrome, ADHD, and other neurological disorders to feel included and accepted by everyone. Anne lives in metro-Detroit with her husband Nick, their sons Levi and Gus, 3 cats, a dog, and a leopard gecko.
I am going to start the five one sentence reviews I will be sharing today with Refrain by Susan Griscom. I won an audible and kindle copy. I quickly got hooked, so scrolled through my Kindle and read every one of the Blood Courtesan Kindle Unlimited series stories that I had.
Oh Yeah…Vampires…I love when I see my name in a book, and even though Refrain, which is a complete story, is predictable, it is filled with enough steamy deliciousness to keep me reading more of the series and wanting more of her work.
3 Stars
Reborn (Blood Courtesans) by Michelle Fox was an Amazon freebie.
Reborn is a complete story, a novella, about the loss of innocence and I love Myra’s feistiness, the laughs, the kisses and bullets, though I did get frustrated with her casual stupidity, but my love of vampires keeps me reading most anything with them in it.
3 Stars
Wanted: Corynne by Kristen Strassel was an Amazon freebie.
One way to deal with bullies is to become a vampire…LOL…she had been bullied to the point of murder and was counting on becoming a courtesan, offering blood and sex, to find a place to belong in this action packed story that filled all my bloody needs.
Thank all that is vampire that someone wanted to pay their good fortune forward or Angelica may never have been accepted as a blood courtesan because she would would make a personal sacrifice, sell her soul for her sister, and I love her naive yet provocative personality filled with humor.
3 Stars
Ensnared: Star by Rebecca Rivard & Michelle Fox was an Amazon freebie.
She had been set up for the theft of one hundred thousand dollars and her only out was to become a courtesan…one month with Remy de la Lune, but this hunkalicious vampire has met his match and I was happy to be along for the ride.
Seeing I am such a cover hound, I thought it would be interesting to get Zanne Raby’s take on the cover for Descent Into Darkness. It sure is colorful and intriguing, making me want to know what is happening. Welcome Zanne.
Subject: Discuss your cover
Hello All! I’m really excited at being
featured as a guest author on the Fundinmental blog and I’d like to thank Cheryl
for inviting me to write about the cover of my latest novel, Descent into
Darkness, the second book in the sci-fi/ space opera series, “The
Chronicles of Deneb”. Since I’m working on a series I’d like to begin with a
little background to set the scene.
Let’s jump forward to the year 2080 CE. In the sixty years separating us from the characters in my series, humanity has just about ignored every little bit of science related to our climate catastrophe and allowed our beautiful planet to plunge into decay. Politicians and big multinational companies wore blinders over the decades that resulted in droughts, famine, and mass migration. But rather than own the problem, the developed world manned the guns and doubled down on isolationism. That’s not all folks, because NASA, the European Space Agency and ROSCOSMOS banded together and created the Space Ark Project – three massive shuttles that were built to be the saviors of the human species. Except in 2080, that’s not what’s really going on. When Dr. Daniel Radu, the project manager of the United States of North American’s Space Ark Project, overhears the truth he decides that he’s not going to take it lying down. He didn’t get to be one of the best astronomical engineers on Earth by twiddling his thumbs after all. Daniel arranges for his team to take control of the Space Ark Mayflower and off they go, leaving the rotting planet and the even rottener politicians behind while they rocket through space and on to their destination: Deneb7. Now fast forward three years to 2083 CE and let’s catch up with the crew in the second novel of the series, Descent into Darkness, where they try to integrate into Denebian society. Little did the intrepid space travellers realize that the desert planet was populated until their arrival and by then, it was too late. The war-like denizens of Deneb sent out a greeting party and you can just imagine that things didn’t go so well for the crew. The refugees try their best to integrate with their new neighbours. But what do you know, the humans bring along some unintended guests in the form of a deadly disease that begins to blaze through the local population. With Denebians dying like flies, a lack of communication and a series of misunderstandings spark off a deadly planet-wide conflict. The cover of Descent into Darkness is a reflection of this. The fires of war blaze in the background while one of the powerful warbirds descends through the roiling clouds of smoke to bring battle to the enemy. The entire planet is ablaze and I tried to capture that on the cover bThanky portraying mushrooming clouds of greasy orange smoke billowing up from the ashes of destruction. Above it all, isolated from the carnage, is one of the weapons of annihilation. There, high above the wreckage and safe in their warbird, a pilot is about to make their descent. High above the planet’s ravaged surface they soar, unseeing of the destruction they unleashed on the city below, unaware of the carnage they wrought that extinguished thousands of lives. The title of the novel, “Descent into Darkness”, alludes not only to the actual massacre of the population and destruction of the planet exacted by the war on Deneb, but also of the moral abyss into which the characters find themselves falling. In the novel’s cover, I’ve tried to distill some of the more important elements of the plot to incorporate them into the cover. If you want to dive into the depths of Deneb, why not to pick up a copy of Descent in
Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts. Happy to have you here, Zanne.
Descent into Darkness: Mayhem follows the
Mayflower in the second book of The Chronicles of Deneb series. Journey along
with the crew of the Space Ark Mayflower as they adapt to their new home on the
planet Deneb. But along with their struggle to integrate into an alien culture,
a new battle sweeps across the planet with the arrival of the human-transmitted
Chimera bactovirus, bringing war and fanning the flames of racial intolerance.
With a bloody conflict raging across the planet, the crew of the Mayflower is
split between the two factions and embroiled in the chaos and destruction.
Descend with the crew into darkness, where the only survivors of a global war
will be on the right side of the border.
EXCERPT
“Pallav? You alright?” Tara’s voice broke him from his
reverie and he pasted on a phony smile.
“Sorry darling, I was a million light years away. I’ll be
fine,” he promised. Sweat trickled down his back in the unrelenting heat of the
Denebian day, his disruptive pattern shirt already sticking to his body as he
shrugged into his rucksack.
“Daddy, I’m gonna miss you.” The chirpy sing-song voice of
little Jolanta gave him cause to smile at the child as she held out her arms to
him. Swooping her up, Pallav dropped a kiss on the little girl’s rosy brown
cheek, her eyes glistening with tears.
“And I’m going to miss you too, little one.” Hugging the
orphaned girl to his chest, he burrowed his face into the cloud of dark hair
that was as soft as a feather before pinching her cheek and gently setting her
down. Guilt pierced his heart at the sad resigned look on the child’s face. Had
it not been for him, Jolanta would be snug as a bug with her biological parents
and not in lockdown high above the capital city living with a pair of humans.
Poor little thing… she’s known so much loss in her short
life, he thought. Surrounded by death as the human Chimera bactovirus raged
across Deneb, Jolanta had been cruelly abandoned by her mother after Tara
retrieved the fallen child from the cobblestoned marketplace in the centre of
the capital city. He could still picture his wife walking through the door with
the tiny tot in tow. Shocked, surprised, but then captivated, Pallav let the
child into his heart. It wasn’t like his two teenagers wanted him around
anymore. No, Luke and Isabella were busy chartering their own course in the Wessel
world with Gomalan insisting that they attend the best boarding school in the
nation.
Taking advantage of his position, Pallav had initiated a
thorough search for Jolanta’s parents only to get confirmation that they were
amongst the thousands in Styria who had succumbed to the pandemic. Since her
arrival, the young orphan had been his little shadow, never leaving his side,
following the big man’s movements with her luminous opalescent eyes. He smiled
inwardly at the thought of Jolanta climbing into her little cot and begging her
new daddy for a bedtime story. Guilt-ridden he realized that he’d miss her more
than his own children who were so immersed in their new lives that even their
weekly holotalks were rushed and awkward. Laughing at himself, Pallav knew he
was totally under the child’s spell.
“I promise to be back in time for market day, so no tears,
okay?” Taking the little urchin’s chin in his hands, Pallav stared into her
eyes. “And you have a promise to make to me too young lady, don’t you?” The little
brown head nodded up and down, serious eyes acknowledging the responsibility
her adopted father had assigned to her.
AUTHOR Bio and Links
Since the days of
the Napoleonic War, there has always been a member of Zanne’s family in
uniform. Choosing to follow in the footsteps of her ancestors, Zanne joined the
Canadian Armed Forces in 1980, and was selected to attend the Royal Military
College of Canada – the first year that women were accepted into that
prestigious academy of learning. After graduation, she studied to become a
Transportation and Movements Officer in the Royal Canadian Air Force.
During a career
spanning 38 years, some of the most memorable experiences involved command of 8
Mission Support Squadron as part of Joint Task Force Afghanistan, leading a
study on support to the Canadian Arctic involving several trips to Northern
Canada, including Canadian Forces Station Alert (the most northern settlement
in the world), a three–year tour with NATO at Joint Force Command Brunssum, a
deployment as the NATO Liaison Officer to United States Central Command, and
finally a nomination as the Deputy Commander for the Canadian Forces Recruiting
Group.
After hanging up
the uniform and putting away the combat boots, Zanne bought a small acreage in
Central Ontario and designed her own house. With an office overlooking the
picturesque shores of Georgian Bay, surrounded by maps and images of alien
worlds, she is pursuing her life-long ambition to become an author. Enough of
the reports and returns that littered her desk over her career, now she could
turn her attention to unleashing the creativity that had taken a back seat to
the analytical world of logistics. The time had come to shake the dust off and
begin a new career. The winds of change had called.
Zanne is
currently crafting The Chronicles of Deneb, a sci-fi series that will
take the reader from a dystopian earth on a voyage across the galaxy in search
of a safe haven. But the planets the team discover provide anything but the
sanctuary they sought. In her spare time, Zanne enjoys travel, photography,
hiking, and gardening. And always, a good story to pass the time.
I love suspense, thrills, crime and mystery. I have also been to Mexico numerous times, though I never saw it the way Carmen Amato has. Her book covers attracted my attention, because I am a sucker for great covers. Another thing that really caught my attention and made me curious was the author herself. She has a very interesting history, so be sure and scroll down to check her out.
I am going to review them in the order I read them. If they look good to you, click on the cover to hop over to Amazon. They may still be free, but be sure and check for the “0”.
The covers fit the series so well. I love when an author creates a brand.
Her whole world was this moment, this stinky mat, this iron beast that she had become. A fabulous description of Emilia Cruz…and she will need that iron will, that strength, in what is to come. Emilia is the first female detective in Acapulco and she had fought hard for it. I love the character and as I read the five stories in Made In Acapulco, I grew to love her more.
Machismo. Corruption. Cartels.
“Always pay it forward. It’s the only way we’ll save our future.”
BEING BRAVE IS NOT THE ABSENCE OF FEAR: IT’S THE COURAGE TO PRESS ON IN SPITE OF FEAR
This introduction into Emilia Cruz only makes me want to read more.
3 Stars
I missed so many books between Made In Acapulco, my introduction to Emilia Cruz, to Narco Noir, the eight book. I have missed a lot.
I have missed all the books in the series except what I consider the introduction to Emila Cruz, Made In Acapulco. I think it probably affected my review, because I was just getting the hang of being in Mexico, but now I do have some familiarity with the characters and how the city of Acapulco operates.
I sense a romance, but what kind of future does a detective from the barrios have with an American with plenty of money? Could they make it work?
Well, that’s a twist. I didn’t see it coming and I am curious where it will go.
She is a badass. I love a strong female character that can hold her own. Even in the machismo world of Mexico, she earns her place and the respect of (at least) some of her coworkers, informants…
Every move is filled with danger and betrayal. Corruption is rampant, so it’s hard to know who to trust. She has to keep things close to the vest.
Her partner, Silvio, is the only person she calls in her time of need.
There is so much about the book I liked, but I was frustrated by some of the characters actions. I don’t want to say much to spoil it for you, because I think it’s worth finding out for yourself.
I do recommend starting at the beginning and you will need to read to the end of the series to get the complete story.
3 Stars
The Emilia Cruz series takes place in Acapulco, Mexico. In The Hidden Light Of Mexico City by Carmen Amato we step away from Acapulco.
“So you’re too afraid to save our country?….What will you leave your grandchildren? A country that’s just a playground of violence for the cartels?”
Eddo hated what he was forced to do just to be able to do the right thing. People will get hurt, but he couldn’t sit back and do nothing just because it was dangerous and may cost him his life.
Luz has sacrificed everything for her family. I feel so bad for her and I wonder when or if she will have her turn. Her family ticks me off. What gives them the right to treat her the way they do. Even her brother walks a fine line in my book. Family is family, but when is too much enough?
An indepth look at the brutality and corruption of Mexico’s’ drug trade and the war for territory.
Whoa…I was brought up short. I thought I knew what the story would be: betrayal, corruption, power hungry, brutal, savage, and those who try to do the right thing. I’ve always heard how Mexico was driven by the drug cartels, so on that front I wasn’t surprised.
The twist with the romance…
The Hidden Light Of Mexico City by Carmen Amato is a great police procedural, suspense/thriller. At times my heart was in my throat and I love the characters, good and bad.
The ending is excellent. Not too short, not too long, just right.
4 Stars
Now, we are real life moments in Mexico. Aapply your suntan lotion, put on your hiking boots, bring your swimsuit, bring your appetite, and let’s go meet some new people.
I took no notes for The Insider’s Guide To The Best Of Mexico. These snippets of introductions from the 42 contributor’s to the guide share their favorites in a page or three. I would take it with me if I were traveling to Mexico.
4 Stars
ABOUT CARMEN AMATO
Following a 30 year career with the Central Intelligence Agency, Carmen Amato writes mystery and suspense, including the Detective Emilia Cruz police series set in Acapulco. Emilia is the first female police detective in Acapulco, confronting Mexico’s cartels, corruption and social inequalities. The series recently won the Poison Cup award for Outstanding Series from Crime Masters of America and was optioned for television.
Originally from upstate New York, Carmen’s experiences in Mexico and Central America launched her fiction career. Carmen is a recipient of both the National Intelligence Award and the Career Intelligence Medal.
I am happy to be hosting Shadows Of Time and having Jackie here to share her thoughts.
Guest
post – The World of Shadows of Time – the significance of the settings
I lived in a village in Yorkshire, so it
was natural for me to begin my novel there. Most of the farmers have retired
and sold land for building, so when June brings Cathy back to the small-holding
or Bob goes in search of the house his mother lived in, new housing reflects
what was happening around me. It was somewhere people like June were rooted,
generations having lived in the same place.
Wickham Hall needed some explanation. When
I wrote the novel, I was an English writer, writing for an English audience. It
hadn’t occurred to me that someone from across the Atlantic would be unfamiliar
with the label “Hall”. I had to give it a specific name, so that it was more
obvious that it was a mansion. To me, it was very familiar. In the next village
was one at the centre of the school I taught in. I borrowed the fountain and
rose garden, and stags’ heads eyes following Cathy round the reception area. I
borrowed the grand staircase, which I’d walked up and down to lessons. Many
such buildings have become hotels in this country, but they only exist because
of the social hierarchy of the past. The Hall reflects change over time, but
the permanence of memories.
I opened the novel in Scarborough, Yorkshire,
a typical English seaside, not known for being always sunny and warm! My
husband and I visited on a hot day, and the description of the crowds on the
beach formed itself in my head, as we rode the open-topped bus along the sea
front and ate fish and chips at our favourite seafood restaurant. The original
version of what I saw that day wasn’t part of a novel, but I wove it into the
beginning and end, as the story began to form itself in my head. It did need
some explanation, when my editor couldn’t quite picture the way the fishing
boats and pleasure boats are all in the same harbour, and there were definitely
no sail boats out on the North Sea on a typical English day. The boats are just
opposite the amusement arcade, right next to the sandy beach, and the funfair
is at one end of the south bay. We had a Zoom meeting, and I was able to show a
photograph that won’t be in the book, but readers from overseas might need to
Google Scarborough! The mock pirate ship really does take people out for a
pleasure ride, and the lighthouse really is there. Peasholm Park is a real
park, visited many times. I wanted to capture a place where people were
enjoying themselves, so that the opening hinted at what was to come and the end
brought us back there, on a positive note.
Because I was thinking about the ways in
which a mother could experience the loss of a child, I included the fact that
Cathy emigrated to Australia. My own daughter emigrated, with her family, so
this was a loss I knew. I’d visited Australia twice, so the bits of Perth I
describe are what I’d seen for myself, for example the children running in and
out of the fountain and the seat at Point Walter, with its profound dedication
to the “lost generation”. Cathy is not my daughter, but I could use her as a
vehicle for the experience of being a mother of a child who emigrates. I wanted
to represent all those mothers who, like me, couldn’t tell the world how it
felt.
The other location I used in the novel is Cornwall, in the south-west tip of this island. When I created Maggie’s pilot, I was reminded of my own father’s time in the RAF during the Second World War. I went to Cornwall on holiday, so that I could go and pay tribute to those who served where he did, at a place called St Eval. It was during this trip that I was struck by the timelessness of the rocks off the shore, and this gave rise to the photo on the cover of the book. They’d seen so much, including my father standing where I stood. Echoes of the past were all around me. I gathered together ideas for characters and plot over about two years, the places seeming to acquire a significance of their own, as they embodied both timelessness and time passing.
Thanks for sharing, Jackie. Good luck with the tour.
Maggie’s
daughter, Cathy, is a successful business woman in Australia. After the failure
of a relationship and her mother’s death, she returns to England for the
funeral, hoping to rekindle her childhood sense of carefree life in the
Yorkshire countryside. She is confronted by revelations about Maggie’s tragic
past, which has a legacy of loss overshadowing her family’s present and future. As Cathy and her sister
June unravel the truth, her mother’s story unfolds in a flashback to 1945. Life
for the young Maggie before they were born reflects the world of mid-century
attitudes towards women who dared to have a baby out of wedlock. The illusion
of the Maggie her daughters knew is dispelled.
Meanwhile, two young
women explore family history, and fate takes a hand. Three families are linked
through coincidences and circumstances they did not know they shared. Cathy
must decide how far, and for what reasons, she allows herself to live in the
shadows of the past.
EXCERPT
The wind was roaring down the side of the house and through
the chimney, and the daffodils were bending their heads in submission. It might
be nearly spring, but that news did not seem to have reached the village yet.
The smell of burning wood always brought back memories of bonfires at the
bottom of the garden. Cathy’s thoughts lingered on bonfire nights at the farm
next door, when the children had ridden down to the middle field on bales of
hay on a trailer pulled by an old tractor. How simple everything seemed then.
Cathy sensed that June’s tense shoulders meant she was
steeling herself for something unpleasant. Cathy was busy trying to work out
how to ask her what was wrong, when suddenly, staring into the flames, June
announced, “We may have to sell the house, you know.”
Cathy heard the words but didn’t believe she had. “What?”
“We may have to sell the house. The solicitor phoned today
about the reading of Mum’s will. The house may not be ours, Cathy. We may have
to move.”
“WHAT?”
“Stop saying what! It seems that someone has appeared out of
nowhere since Mum died. Something about someone else being entitled to
something. I don’t know the details. I’ve been dreading telling you, and I
didn’t want to say anything in front of the twins.”
“How on earth could that be? I don’t believe it! There can’t
be anyone else, can there? There must be a mistake!” She felt the cosy, comfy
world she had come back to claim crumbling to ashes and dust.
AUTHOR Bio and Links
Jackie is a member of the Society of Authors, whose debut novel Shadows of Time was the fulfilment of an ambition nurtured during her working life as a teacher, inspired by her research into her own and others’ family histories. She has been writing as a hobby since childhood, contributing to poetry anthologies since her undergraduate days and being a Poetry Guild national semi-finalist in the 1990s. She has also written short stories for friends, family and students. Since retiring, she has contributed to Poetry Archive Now (2020), with 20-20 Vision, uploaded to YouTube, and has had poetry and flash fiction published online by Flash Fiction North. One of her flash fictions is to appear in an anthology, having been selected from entries during the Morecambe Festival 2021. She had a creative memoir, Shelf Life, published by Dear Damsels in 2019, a precursor to collaborating with her sister on a creative non-fiction memoir Remnants of War, published in 2021. She writes a blog about her walks and thoughts in the Yorkshire and Somerset countryside.
I have read a lot of novels by Carolyn Arnold and she is on my must read list of authors. Girl On The Run was published this month and I was so happy to get a review copy. I love the cover and it fits the story inside.
I love a Prologue. I am like a hungry fish, swimming around, looking for a juicy worm and with a good Prologue, I eagerly bite and get hooked. Girl on the Run by Carolyn Arnold definitely set the hook.
She runs, but there is no escape.
“You’ll be wishing for a bullet by the time she’s done with you.”
I am curious to know why.
Madison was in line for a coffee, when she heard of a shooting at the Liberty Train Station, suspected causalities. Madison is on the case seeing she works for Major Crimes. Two dead, one in the hospital.
Madison is tenaciious, a Bulldog. She felt putting bad guys behind bars was her legacy and made personal sacrifices to achieve it. She has her chocolate lab, Hershey and her fiancee, Troy Matthews, who works for the Stiles Police Department too, to keep her grounded.
Who is the girl with the orange backpack that seemed to Madison to be the trigger, and what does she have to do with the shooting?
Madison had been through hell due to corrupt cops, so when she saw the shooter, who had identified himself as a cop, she stood at attention. Could a corrupt cop and the Russian Mafia be behind the shooting? She had dealt with them on more than one occasion. They were prolific in Stiles.
The investigation deepens, spreading out in different directions. Carolyn Arnold is an expert at bringing all the pieces together.
Two dead, one wounded, a girl with an orange backpack, a victim that Madison recognizes from her past, the Russian Mafia, drug trafficking, infidelity, betrayal…Step by step, I follow Madison’s footsteps to the conclusion.
Most of the book, I was plodding along, accumulating clues with Madison, thinking three stars. I was complacent, knowing this is a police procedural so it may lack the in your face thrills and chills I love so much, then…KAPOW…I’m awake now. It’s those punches, book surprises, that add the extra star.
I voluntarily reviewed a free copy of Girl On The Run by Carolyn Arnold.
4 Stars
GOODREADS BLURB
Shivers tear through her, but she must be brave—for herself, for her future. She grips her coat tighter and steps into the night and the cold, pouring rain. Never to be seen again.
An ordinary Monday morning commute turns deadly when a gunman opens fire in the local train station. Detective Madison Knight rushes to the scene, but she’s too late for the victims. Two women were fatally wounded, including an expectant mother, and one is fighting for her life. But it’s the face of one of the dead that has Madison seeing a ghost from her past. She looks just like Madison’s college friend Courtney Middleton, who vanished over fifteen years ago. If it is her, where has she been all these years, and does her resurfacing have anything to do with the shooting?
Eyewitnesses say that a young woman triggered the incident, but both the shooter and the girl seem to have evaporated into thin air. Mounting evidence suggests they may be part of a drug-trafficking operation, the girl being one of their runners. But Madison’s not so sure the girl is the hardened criminal she appears to be.
As Madison races to track down the young woman, more people turn up murdered, and there’s still no sign of the girl. Is her body out there to find or is she on the run? If the latter, is it due to fear or guilt? Could it simply be that the shooting victims were caught in the crosshairs of organized crime? Madison’s not sure, but she can’t shake her niggling suspicion: what if it was something more than that?
An absolutely gripping and addictive crime thriller. Perfect for fans of Angela Marsons, Lisa Regan, and Rachel Caine.
ABOUT CAROLYN ARNOLD
CAROLYN ARNOLD is an international bestselling and award-winning
author, as well as a speaker, teacher, and inspirational mentor. She
has four continuing fiction series—Detective Madison Knight, Brandon
Fisher FBI, McKinley Mysteries, and Matthew Connor Adventures—and has
written nearly thirty books. Her genre diversity offers her readers
everything from cozy to hard-boiled mysteries, and thrillers to action
adventures.
Both her female detective and FBI profiler series have been praised
by those in law enforcement as being accurate and entertaining, leading
her to adopt the trademark: POLICE PROCEDURALS RESPECTED BY LAW
ENFORCEMENT™.
Carolyn was born in a small town and
enjoys spending time outdoors, but she also loves the lights of a big
city. Grounded by her roots and lifted by her dreams, her overactive
imagination insists that she tell her stories. Her intention is to touch
the hearts of millions with her books, to entertain, inspire, and
empower.
She currently lives north of London, Ontario, with her husband and
two beagles and is a member of Crime Writers of Canada and Sisters in
Crime.
I want to welcome Kirstyn Petras to fundinmental to share her thoughts about characters. Love ’em or hate ’em, they need to draw us into their lives.
One of the interesting, and slightly tricky
things about writing unreliable/disagreeable narrators is finding enough in
them to make readers like them enough to care, but also have a healthy distaste
for their flaws. Anti-heroes are very fun to write and create, to have a
combination of sympathy and odiousness to keep the story interesting. A
mentality of “it’s okay if they’re hurt, but maybe don’t?”
Balancing
Melody in The Next Witness is my best
example of this. In the writing process, I had conflicting advice from beta
readers – some that wanted to enhance her more asshole characteristics, and
others that wanted to enhance her good qualities. But, I enjoyed the discussion
because it was a reflection of her role within the story as well. Is she weak,
vulnerable, and innocent? Or the leader of a movement that allows its members
to die without a second thought? Should readers care about her fate?
Absolutely. But with the acknowledgment that she is a deeply flawed human, not wholly good or bad, just a product of a
very cold, claustrophobic environment.
Derek
is similar, he is not a genius, he places himself in an environment in which he
realizes, too late, he has no control over. Alexander is absolutely responsible
for his actions, but he is also attempting to survive and advance in a society
that has drilled certain expectations of his behavior into his head.
It’s
so easy to vilify or glorify. Writing this book was a chance to explore the
layers in between, and I hope readers feel the same.
Thanks so much for visiting Kirsyan. I love this simple cover. Says so much with so little.
Alexander
Covington is hunting a traitor: Melody Karsh, a missing girl accused of
treason, a Party member who has forsaken her country. But, letters are
appearing in mailboxes, being slipped beneath doors, and in the pockets of
passersby. “Free Melody” is being spray painted on walls. Her image – cold,
shivering, pathetic – has captured the public’s attention and sympathy.
Melody has no idea that
her name is being used to start a movement, not until the executions of those
demanding her freedom start airing on television.
Derek Lin would feel
sympathy, if he didn’t blame Melody for the deaths of those who have
disappeared without a trace, caught up in the investigation to find her.
Melody must choose to
join the fight or stand aside. Derek will become a leader or break under the
pressure. Alexander will decide how many bodies must fall to save his own life.
EXCERPT
“Well, we thank you very much, Detective Covington, for your
time and encourage the public to cooperate fully. And now, a word from our
sponsors.”
“Clear!” Morgan called, and Covington stood up. He ripped
the microphone off his blazer, and, without a word, strode out of the studio.
Morgan started screaming the second he was out of earshot.
“Do you want us shut down?! Do you have any idea what you’ve
done?!”
“Morgan, what is he going to do?” Denise asked, leaning
back. “Look, he didn’t want me to ask a question, and I did anyway. They never
actually announce stories like this. I wanted to know why – how far she could
have gotten – the fact he didn’t answer doesn’t make that look good, does it?”
Morgan gaped at her, before returning to the mixing booth.
Derek followed her and peeked over her shoulder to watch the playback.
There, on the screen, were the pictures of the so-called
terrorists. And there was her picture. She’d been at the bar, waiting for Sean,
however long ago. He’d seen her picture, the background of Sean’s phone, heard
Sean talk about her, mope about her, drink himself stupid over her.
“We have a problem.” He muttered to Morgan.
“What?” Morgan jumped, not having seen him following her.
“Why?”
AUTHOR Bio and Links
Kirstyn Petras
is a fiction writer and commodities reporter but primarily identifies as
caffeine in a human suit held together by hair spray and sheer force of will.
She currently resides in Texas, though claims home as a combination of New York
and Edinburgh. When not writing, she trains contortion and aerial hoop. She has
been published in Punk Noir, and is the co-host of Dark Waters, a literary
podcast exploring all that is dark, ready, and wonderfully twisted.
I’m not sure if it’s common knowledge, but traditionally
published authors have limited control over the cover of their books. The Wild
Rose Press has a Cover Sheet with basic questions like genre, tone, elements an
author would like to see on the cover, and hero/heroine descriptions. Once the
form is submitted, their talented cover artists take over.
For Friends to the End,
I felt the tone of the cover should be suspenseful, mysterious, and just a
little spooky. It’s a ghost adventure, after all. And since Zach and his new
friends are looking for a mysterious vanishing house, I suggested that the
cover might include a spooky house or a room in a spooky house. And maybe even
Zach’s silhouette or the silhouette of four kids. From there, it was a waiting
game. I had no idea what the cover artist would do.
I was thrilled when I saw what cover artist Diane Carlile
put together. I really couldn’t ask for a better cover for this book, and she
included elements I hadn’t thought to ask for. The moon is full on the night
Zach and his friends find the house, and their first glimpse of the old
Victorian home is through the trees. Before they reach the house, they visited
a graveyard. And I like that on the cover we only see the backs of the kids.
This allows the reader to use their imaginations. The dark purple and yellows
give an ominous feel. The cover is better than anything I had imagined. There
isn’t anything I hate. I feel lucky about that, but then The Wild Rose Press
does a wonderful job on their covers.
What do you think about the cover? Is it spooky, yet not too
spooky to scare you away? I hope so because the adventure is worth braving
ghosts.
Thanks for having me on your blog!
BLURB
Twelve-year-old
Zach is convinced he’ll never be happy without his best friend Jeremy by his
side. But both of their lives changed with a bang five months ago, and as far
as Zach’s concerned, it’s his fault Jeremy will never see his twelfth birthday.
When Zach moves with
his family to a Chicago suburb, he quickly becomes friends with a group of
thrill-seeking kids trying to find a disappearing haunted house. But Zach’s not
worried. He doesn’t believe in ghosts, so he follows them into a wild,
dangerous encounter that becomes a battle to decide what’s real and what’s not.
Excerpt
We stopped a few yards from the cemetery, our mouths hanging
open and our eyes wide.
“Please tell me you see that,” I whispered.
“If you mean the white lights floating above the ground,”
Josh said, “we see it.”
“They’re orbs,” Morgan corrected, as if knowing the proper
name for the glowing spheres made it okay to see them.
“Orbs?” Josh asked.
“Spirits of the dead,” I replied, remembering what Morgan
had told me.
Dom scooted his bike closer. “Maybe we should ask them if
they’ve seen the house.”
“Seriously?” Morgan asked.
“Yeah.”
Morgan shook her head, causing her ponytail to swing from
side to side. “Oh, no! I learned my lesson the last time we were here. I’m not
stepping one foot off the shoulder of the road.”
“Your right foot is in the grass,” Dom said, shining his
flashlight on her sneaker.
Morgan scowled and repositioned herself to have both feet on
concrete.
Three iridescent orbs floated over headstones. I thought
about the movies that warned people to stay away from the light. Maybe they
weren’t warning us about a bright beam of light, but instead small glowing
balls. Maybe if one of them touched you, the spirit would take over your body.
Maybe they were waiting for someone to be stupid enough to come closer. I
suddenly wondered if I’d met anyone who’d been possessed by a spirit and
immediately thought of Olivia and her strange habits.
Then I told myself I was being ridiculous.
Or was I? Think about it. How would anyone know if a ghost
hitched a ride with the person in front of him or her?
AUTHOR Bio and Links
C.L. Colyer
found her love for writing in first grade when her class was sent to the
library and asked to find a book for their first book report. While she doesn’t
still have this book report, she’s very proud to say she got an A on it. Her
favorite thing about the book was that it had no words. That’s right, not one!
That gave her the freedom to interpret the pictures in any way she wanted and
write her own story.
This sparked
her love for writing essays. It wasn’t until she was an adult that she sat down
and penned her first novel. This story has a special place in her heart because
it’s the story that helped her discover her passion for writing. She has since
written several books, many of which may never see the light of day, but all of
which helped her learn to combine her passion for writing with her fascination
with all things mythical. You’ll find
examples of this in her novels.
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Hi Everyone. With Easter and a visit from my brother in law, this has been a busy week. He is a Type A personality and helped us take care of a couple of projects around the house.
The Pensacola Beach ball is being repainted. What does this look like to you?
I have been catching up on some blogging and reading. The weather has been fantastic. Today it looks like we might get some rain but we need it, so that’s okay. Hope you had a great week and another coming up.
I got the idea and the motivation to start doing Tackling The TBR from All The Book Blog Names Are Taken.
It has helped me to keep track of my reading shelf as far as current
events and I also started doing a post for Books From The Backlog,
from Carole’s Random Life in Books,
to tidy up my shelves. I feel better about my out of control TBR and
have even knocked off a couple of those old ones that had been
hanging around for years.
COME ON….JOIN IN.
Previous Total: 2130
Currently Reading
Books Read
Books Added
I added both books because of a giveaway. Each is linked to Goodreads.
Books DNF-ed: 0
Books Deleted: 0
Duplicates Removed: 0
New TBR Total: 2132
My TBR didn’t go down, because the books I read are coming off my currently reading shelf. Reviews are posted or will be posted soon. And, I went to my mother in law’s for Easter, and Mr Wonderful’s brother came down for the week from Connecticut. Felt good to be out and about. Have a wonderful week.